mafy_derrich

Wasted time

Over 20

A prologue lasting over 10 chapters. I hope the whole novel is not like this.

I hate this novel. It’s stupid, no lemons well I will be damned. I hate the misogynistism. I find no pleasure reading this..

I disagree, I think the cultivation realms are quite confusing and not properly introduced. Considering this is a cultivation novel, if readers are not able to properly and simply and gauge the strength of realms then the novel will be a pain to read. This novel does too much unnecessarily. Even during dual cultivation the do too much damn .. I find simplicity always makes a clear plot.

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

Sometimes this type of cliche novel plot is like a breath of relaxing fresh air😏

Let’s see where this goes[img=proud]

Am done, this is simply 🤬