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Great chapter

Like I said, I still love this novel. It’s also your artwork that you should be able to portray in anyway that you like, I just also know that you as a writer want us readers to be engaged and enjoy reading your work so I can’t help but put my opinion out there. Others may not agree with my thoughts but I feel that you already have such a beautiful world that you have built and amazing characters that there isn’t a need the majority of times to over compensate with over dramatized writing, for me personally it breaks the immersion heavily but I still enjoy it and look forward every day to new chapters. Thank you for your hard work.

I can’t lie, I hate to say this since I love this novel so much, but this was unbelievably corny. I understand that he wanted to wait to reveal this because he wanted to see how they would all act first but yeah, the way they are all acting and how dramatic he is being right now. It’s really taking away from what should have been a really good few chapters. It was just way to drawn out and corny.

It’s honestly crazy to me, like he is fighting a battle royal to the death for the entire human race not to lose a sector and be weakened as a whole yet all these paragons can think about is their domestic power struggles. I’m completely blown away, it’s honestly almost too unrealistic to the point where I question the writing.

Hell yeah, , can’t wait for tomorrows chapters. Also loving the new cover art!

This honestly makes no sense, how can these paragons be so stupid.

Bruh seriously……

It wouldn’t make any sense for this to be the case, he’s basically the main enemy and goal of the whole novel, I don’t think this theory is true. I could definitely be wrong though.

Oh I’m excited for the coming chapters!