Lovidicus

Does the MC remain a slave for Sullyvan and Anya? Cus I read to chapter 22, and they are starting to get really annoying.

The starting was really good. It had good thing going on but as soon as it hit chapter 40 it just turned into one of the stupidest rom-com. I mean I don't mind a little romance in an action novel, it brings a little colour to the story and the MC builds a little character. Although the mc here made "clear" he wasn't going to have a relationship but reading up to chapter 85 it just became a painfully forced rom-com. The whole situation with Alea was incredibly forced. I mean if the genders were reversed and the mc was female Alea would haven one the villains for bothering the MC this much about joining her team. And Mc is too beta for someone who wants to "screw the world".

wow I just realised humans drink water by drinking water.

And thus pride was born....

I have to say this one's a gem. Although I was not a fan of "Guild wars" (not for the same reason that everyone seems to have a chip on their shoulder for). Can't say much about writing since I am not a native English speaker. The story development is good. I like the fact that we don't jump into kingdom building right away but see the MC grow and slowly (but not in an annoying way) become strong and then he settles himself. The characters are also good. Some have good personality that seems real but there are also some who are band. This is easily one of the best mc I have ever read in a webnovel here. Business minded and not a mc who still sucks on his mother's teat but also not a mc that is trying way too hard to be an edgelord. The world building is also good. The author put thoughts into the continents he created and didn't just spurt out some random names and forget about them. Overall conclusion give it a try and don't expect a world where there is dragons and insect people to follow the laws and physics of our world.🤗

don't play the sympathy card now....

so does the MC has superpowers IRL?

Ya sorry mate. Maybe I was a little too harsh on your novel (still hate eastern genre though). And you are right I didn't read past chapter 50 it's that the app (webnovel) was recommending your novel to me like crazy to the point of being annoying so I thought maybe they did that because my taste in novels. Usually I immediately do a u turn when I see "cultivation" but I didn't see it in the tags so I thought maybe I will like it, but after reading it I was a little mad that it had cultivation. But still that was stupid reason you're just one man and I know it's hard to think of something completely new. Again sorry dude.

the author didn't take a single feedback from all the people who were against Jason taking Greg's offer. And this is also the greediest Author I have ever seen. O don't like to insult authors for the novel they write as I know how hard it is to come up with something completely original especially in the fantasy genre but this shameless author literally asks for power stones in like every chapter. This story isn't even that original as it is just an eastern style revamped with some western words. And he even put this as a pay to read novel. Shameless.

how can someone have literally no pride? he still wants to prove himself where he nearly died defeating the vulture come on! They are the ones in debt and they don't even acknowledge it if they didn't want Jason to represent them as the girl said they could have just solved it with money but they are acting high and mighty by giving HIM an opportunity?