Music_lGraduates

Every child is a blessing👨‍🦯😝😝

Very new novel, I’m really impressed by the way the novel is written, yet it seams to be very fast paced, and has a lot of very descriptive yet unnecessary words, If it continues I’m actually hoping to see how the novel develops.

Before 100🤝😔

Lmao, it’s a satellite

….. soooo honestly just do a time skip

Great beginning, actually I wanted to read something different from typical cultivation stories and this is great, don’t give up

Not meant to be rude just thought it was funny Author:Please tle it easy it’s my first novel Coment: You f up the on the fourth paragraph

Great nove, feel like its rare to see a novel like this one

It’s like those cultivation novels where they destroy the world and be like “In three breaths time”

Thats too confusing, just stick to little loli and dont change the name too frequently