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Pretty good so far! Read the prologue and up through chapter 6, will read more when I have time. I love the dark aspects of it, things such as the voids, darkness and chaos, and space and time all mingling together, with their own jobs in the universe. The encounters between Genesis and Heaven, clashing back and forth, trying to realize a correct way of going about the re-creation of everything, and then whom I assume is the MC, coming about in the Astral Realm! Though, he seems to be experiencing every pain imaginable from the moment he wakes up there haha. I love it so far, and recommend it! The more you read, the more enticed you get! Good job!

Yo this just got real, super quick.

Ahhh, I see now. Nevermind then!

Ah, his appearance did change.

Truly words to consider. I wonder how things are gonna go for Genesis now.

Chaos in the Void, though it might not be the "Chaos" as described earlier. It's still fascinating to picture so much going on at once.

If this prologue is meant to be an origin story for everything, you're doing a very good job. Heaven and Genisis both seem like level-headed individuals, yet their ideas clash. I like it so far if I'm understanding it right.

Read the first chapter. These are some long chaps you have! Are they 5k+ words? I'm used to shorter chaps, so I only read the first, and a little bit into 2. But, I like where it's going. I've never really explored the concept of Yuri, although I am a fan of romance, and the characters seem quite intriguing in terms of their potential in the future. Well done so far!

Pretty good start. Kinda sudden how the father sacrifices his daughter to become mayor, but it's intriguing because I want to know what will happen to her in the future, if she'll die, or perhaps survive, or maybe even be taken away by the demon. Nice job so far!

Pretty good so far! Story was conveyed well, world-building is exceptional, grammar is pretty good, I like where it's going! I'll read on later when I have more time

Great start! Kinda like an "antihero" sort of protag, with a darker aura around him. I like where it's going! Some of the grammar could be improved, but other than that, gj

Really really good start. First chapter had me on the edge of my seat to figure out what was going on on that bus! Although it was only a nightmare, it’s still a great introduction to the horror aspect, and the true feeling of loneliness that the MC experienced, desperately trying to get ahold of anyone. Loved it so far! I’ll read more when chapters release

Read a few chaps, and all I can say is that this story is super relatable. It captures the essence of an aspiring author and goes through the mindset of him as he learns about his struggles and the natural hardships of being a writer trying to make it to the top. It's pretty inspiring TBH, I'm glad we all have something to read and relate ourselves with LOL. Great start!

Love the idea of an AI partner. It's like he's watching over Wei and giving him advice, but he's too under-leveled to be of any substantial use at the moment. Good start!

Author here, I appreciate all feedback. If you think something was interesting, let me know! If you thought something was disinteresting, let me know! I wanna make sure this story appeals to a wide audience.