AYYY!! I REALLY APPRECIATE YOU READING AND THE POSITIVE REVIEW FAM! I'LL DO MY BEST TO MAKE AN ENJOYABLE STORY ALONG THE LINES OF WHAT I'D HOPE TO SEE IN THE STORY AND TRY TO IMPROVE ALONG THE WAY!

DANG RIGHT I'MA REVIEW MY STORY! ITS FAST-PACED, AN ACTUALLY EVIL MC WITH NO MORAL BS, AN INTERESTING POWER SYSTEM, AND JUST OVERALL GOODNESS! HOPE YALL ENJOY AND HAPPY READING!

Just now seeing this comment, but thank you for the feeback! What part of the story has quality issues? Grammar, pacing, etc?

YOU'LL SEE😉, NEW CHAPTER OUT TONIGHTO!

THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THE OVERWHELMINGLY POSITIVE REVIEW AS WELL AS THE HELPFUL CRITICISM! I'LL DO MY BEST TO KEEP THE WORD-CHOICE DIVERSE AND FRESH GOING FORWARD!

I REALLY APPRECIATE THAT! THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THE KIND REVIEW!

Very nice! Author does a great job of describing the main character and starting the story off quickly and strong with a compelling hook. Excited too see where the story goes

A very compelling story with an interesting twist on the kingdom-building system genre. I love how the story gets right into things without wasting time on useless things. The action is quick and clearly explained and I'm excited to see how the author develops the story!

MODULARITY: THE STATE OF BEING MODULAR. MODULAR: OF OR RELATING TO FIELDS HAVE A CHARACTERISTIC GREATER THAN ZERO. BASICALLY, SAYING THERES A SPECK OF A VISIBILITY.

MORE SO UPDATED WITH COLORS BEING REFINED AND THE CHARACTERS (SPECIFICALLY OZ LOOKING BETTER)

I'd consider the initial chapters pretty fast-paced while slowly introducing world-building elements. Many are hinted at, while some things will be explained later. Very observant readers may catch certain themes or have "ahah" moments if they're observant. Thanks for reading!

I COULD NEVER FORGET YOU, FAM! EVEN NOW I'M STILL GRATEFUL FOR THE REVIEW YOU GAVE ME, AS I WAS ABLE TO USE THAT VALUABLE FEEDBACK AND IMPLEMENT MORE WORLD-BUILDING INTO THE STORY. AS FAR AS FUTURE CHAPTERS TO COME, I HAVE MUCH MORE PLANNED, AND I'M INCREDIBLY GRATEFUL FOR THE SUPPORT! IN THIS SMALL HIATUS I'VE BEEN DEVELOPING THE LORE OF THE WORLD AND CAN'T WAIT TO SHOW IT OFF VERYS SOON!

THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR YOUR PATIENCE!!

Oof, this felt really forced, I was hopeful from the beginning of a more deprived MC that would level up and fight on his own with summons but it seems thats already been ruined.

NEW CHAPTER OUT NOW AND EVERYDAY THIS WEEK

Well said

YOU'LL SEE, EVERYTHING HAS ITS PLACE, EVEN IF YOU MISSED IT BEFORE. YOU'LL HAVE THAT AHAHHH MOMENT SOON

TRUST THE PROCESS MY FRIEND, I PROMISE I WON'T LET YOU DOWN ;)