Porkster_Terry

While the story is good in general & progressing nicely, the mc feels very one dimensional. See nobody can be good all the time, i am not saying to make him a criminal or anything along those lines, i just feel he is always too good. Taking care of everybody, donating everything, never felling anything bad or taking revenge for that matter, loving somebody all of a sudden, etc. It feels like a game or some mythological who is always calm, virtuous. But it doesn't work actually.

Completely agree with you, it is breaking the flow of the story. One second i am emersed in the story & second some unnecessary plot like this, breaks it. Is he gonna keep helping everybody, he takes roles from.

That GPA thing, just reeks of Chinese novel.

The story, itself is nice but i feel it is very fast paced. It lacks the realism sometimes, which breaks the flow of the story. Especially going from a nobody to reach that height, that too without any obstacle seems to optimistic.

Loved how the story is progressing. Just keep it up man. Would love if you could explore the character, a bit more, everything else works just fine.

Batman...???? Warner..DC....???

It seems like the quality is deteriorating as the story progress & new chapters come...

Their is not much direction in the story. The Plotline feels very scattered. The story otherwise seems very nice, but i would just love for the chapters to be bit more interrelated & for the story to have a bit more of a direction.

raw ?