IcewaterKat

Whoo hoo

Crossing my fingers and toes for Dia.

The last of this chapter is what I've thought should happen shortly after the intro fight.

What happens next? Hope all is well.

An interesting spin on a cultivation type story that almost doesn't feel like it & with a feel of fantasy on the side. I can't think of spelling/grammar mistakes as they don't stand out, if there are any. It's harsh and gruesome from the start but absolutely captivating trying to figure out what is go on without feeling teased with the lack of information or explanation. The 'personality' of the system is enjoyable for the writing creativity but I can't decide if I want to cheer for it or hate on it. It's a very well written style of a system. The MC might be a good guy deep down inside but there's some dark or gray spots that are easy to see in his actions. Very much looking forward to more. (there is some pretty steamy scenes for those that enjoy that level of culture) Knockout story

Well now it's apparent for why this is all being done but now it's getting tricky. Looks like being the best might prove to be fatal. Not being quick enough also sounds like it will be fatal. I'm going to root for the original members & hope they all survive. I'm worried but I'm crossing fingers.

Ummm...

Need more than 7 characters. Is there a minimum to get them their own image?

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