An_Unknown_Writer

Him getting a wurmple pissed me off wurmple and it’s evolutions are complete garbage he has a Ratana wurmple is crap

What’s your addiction with smoking and drinking

Why are you so fixated on drugs

It’s pretty good, there is just way too many useless chapters. The author will mark some of them as filler but not all of them. I found myself skipping around chapters because it felt like some chapters were just drawn out explanations or had no contribution to the development of the plot.

Not good the game makes no sense totally unbalanced. Half the pages are made up of stats sheets and half the chapters are useless filler

Garbage, random POV switches that make no sense. The author is in denial saying that it’s obvious and that people who can’t understand it have reading problems. The world count is inflated on every chapter because the author will just repeat his status over and over. Half this book can be skipped because of the massive amount of filler. His family is a wierd every single person has a mental illness. The premise was interesting but the author managed to make the concept complete and utter garbage.

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I’m going to touch you stop being so vague

Dang unc is back I’ll be back when this has 150+

Just put this at the end of a chapter