Shadowlord717

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Keep up the great work on your Ben 10 fanfiction! I genuinely enjoy reading it. I'm really looking forward to seeing you finish this story all the way to the end.

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During the first time I read this novel Overlord fanfiction, I enjoyed Volume One; however, in Volume Two, there is a little bit of a problem. I feel like when I read it, it's as if a different author wrote it or, in some cases, it's not really well-written. It's full of explicit content, lemons, or adult themes. There's no introduction about how the main character plans for the future or his position in the new world. It's just focused on the main character's immediate desires without considering his surroundings. Additionally, he often argues with his AI system, making it seem like a childish portrayal rather than a mature character development. In my opinion, it feels like a beginner's work or simply an indulgence in obsessions. This is just my perspective; others might have different opinions. I believe Volume Two needs to be rewritten, but Volume One is okay, although it could benefit from some revisions as well but it’s still okay

Dear author, I thoroughly enjoy reading your story. The title of the fanfiction, "Jumping to the Multiverse When Our Star Reading," is enjoyable and very well-written. I appreciate the effort you've put into crafting it. There are no other issues with it. I commend you for completing one of your stories; it speaks volumes about your dedication and talent. I truly appreciate your commitment to finishing your work, unlike some other authors who leave their stories unfinished. Your perseverance is admirable, and I thank you for creating such captivating fanfiction. My respect to you, Sensors, Shadowlord717, WebNovel Reader

I really don’t like his brother died in the volcano. I understand is for character development but there’s another options for character development. Maybe this is just an excuse to make that character [img=disgusted][img=Sigh] very convenient

"No need to rewrite the story; just continue until you finish the fanfiction. Once you have the ending, you can then edit and rewrite the story."