And yet Oliver still hides and doesn't try his best at anything, with the same dismissive attitude as always. Even trying to hold back at this moment, to not overtake his sister. His own improvement is a joke that depends on others, even when he got talent and strength that surpasses them all. He got his starting point, but doesn't use it.

Hmm.. So Beatrice is wounded.. but the most important question is, did she get R-worded? Cause if she did i will probably stop reading. And if she didn't, then it would be inconsistent with the situation. After all, this is human nature, especially for beautiful women.

Such a stupid buildup for a faceslap.. Dragged out to the limits for a moment of showing off.. how pathetic.

I dropped it myself. Got bored of it honestly.. It gets even more boring as it goes.

Hmm.. Yeah you could do that. Try to limit the nr of women he gets tho.. I can already smell a few more on the horizon. The ones he has right now are enough for this volume. Maybe when he returns home, he will be alone since his women are in a special "Ghost storage space" and Nyx comes out to play. They can have their own space at that point for a scene.

Well, i hope Nyx will eventually get her full scene as well. She seems a bit too good to not be given attention.

Ehh.. i would say to keep your job. Writing is unstable, man.. Today you're popular, tomorrow nothing. Be more cautious haha. Although, as a reader, i support you, i want more chaps for your novel. But i can tell you that it will not make it to the top, not until you correct your english and add more depth to it. Your future is your call, but don't rely too much on writing until you're experienced enough and get a stable reader base.

Well, don't make promises you can't keep. Better use the time to build a stash. 1 day missed and win win is lost. When you feel like writing, go for 3-4 chaps, and release 1-2 at a time. The goal should be the win-win until you gathered enough for higher privilege, along with the readers to be worth it. You can always edit the chaps based on feedback, but it's always better to have them stashed when possible.

Hmm i see. Well, it was still a bit of cheap play. Self harming to garner sympathy... That's not manly at all. Manipulating with self garm also, not manly at all. At least he'll get another 2 wives, albeit one is kinda broken. Hopefully, the tension eases in future chaps... though I am expecting to see all main chars crippled and losing limbs left and right during every fight with mobs.

Hmm what a drama without any depth. Such self-destructive behaviour, going against all his goals just for some self-satisfaction. If they crushed the jewel, his mother would die. Just because he feels guilty. Boo Hoo.. How pathetic. I really have a hard time feeling for the characters, especially MC who turns more pathetic by the day. "I tricked you for my goals, so you can cripple me, there you go" How dumb is that? There's no depth to it, and overly exagerated. Also, this adds to the self destructive attitude he has. Ending up almost crippled after every fight, harming himself to build an image that was not even needed, and now this. I don't know what's going through your mind and heart, Gris, but this kind of behaviour is childish and nihilistic. It doesn't garner sympathy or pity, but instead, makes one dislike and distance themselves from the chars.

For now, post daily to get the win-win. That's free 250$ monthly just for posting. With that, better exposure will also come. Our niche of mommy lovers is quite big, so you can expect some growth if you avoid cliches, like young masters, kidnaps, separations and stuff like that.

Keep updating man. People move on quickly, but they also come and go. Just be diligent and post daily, and people will come. There's no other way around it. As for gifts, first show that this won't be a novel to get dropped out of boredom, and if there's hope for 200+ chaps, I will happily give. For now, take my golden tickets and power stones.

Still here man. Keep going, i like the novel.

Breaker/Transcend for Noah. Idk who translates so stupidly.

Once the difference in power is too great, even an untrained man would seem like a master. You're saying he can beat grandmasters, but that he can't. He needs to use his head to begin with, not muscle memory. It's like most times, he has no idea what to do, so instead of making him seem untrained, he seems incompetent.

Wasn't expecting an entire chap about kissing.. Had to skip most of it due to the repetitiveness.... even after, it was mostly repetitive.

Keep reading, it's nothing serious. it's explained later on.

I see. He is too focused on staying hidden, and avoids using his family power. Like, he tries to prove himself too much, while making things harder for himself. He is also a bit too indecisive, especially with harem stuff, so i hope he will mature a little. It looks bad to always act in self denial, just to be a hypocrite and then show guilt and regret... Makes him seem too whimpy. He has power but doesn't know how to use it. Like, using his kacking skills to investigate the emails that thug received instead of checking a note and etc.

Hmm.. MC spent a bit too long playing around with Miles. With these guys who can heal from anything, you go straight for the kill without playing around. After all, he came here to eliminate them not to show off.

This was alright. Opal is a bit annoying with her patronizing style, but the fight was alright i guess. Even better, that MC didn't fight those 2, just to result in some pathetic struggle while he acts like some headless chicken. Skipping it is for the best, since i never expected him to flash behind them, smack the back of their heads and let them sleep. Nope, i didn't expect any cool moves like that at all.