if you write ever agian try to put your character a better life you prick just because your sutiation is not good doesn't mean your character have to suffer you bastard.

Fuck off

You have great writing skills and I actually enjoyed the first 5 chapters but I had to keep my self from throwing up because of how you put your main character in the worst of the worst situation so fix that please and stop using these aimbot bullies(high school stereotypes) be original.

fuck your stupid novel you piece of shit what the fuck did you thought of writing this you shut in bitch

i hate you for this

This the most boring chapter ever please end it quickly

Yeah sucks for your gramme though.

It sounds like a poem