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I suppose that the chemistry of a childish brain is affecting him, I think that is good and gives the opportunity for development in terms of personality ... or it is simply even as an adult XD

Why keep mentioning this? It just makes it look bad

This is what happens you put a Blue Lock character in one where it has nothing to do, they should expel him from the team so that he learns that not everything revolves around him

That fucking unpleasant, it causes repulsion me to only read that. But hey, at least he did not say a hypocrite comment and the prota knows that he is a bad person

His reaction isn't a bit exaggerated? I mean, he's going to a girl's room, they're not going to do anything weird... or is this a cultural thing I don't understand?

The truth is, I didn't have much faith in it, but I was pleasantly surprised, the only bad thing is that the beginning feels a bit shapeless and about halfway through the war the narration feels a bit strange but in general the story is quite good and I love the current state. I think the characterization of the characters is the greatest strength of the fic, Minato feels like Minato, Danzo feels like a real schemer and Hiruzen feels like a real Hokage and not just a parody that you generally read on this site, of course, at the beginning when you just start and you don't have a clear characterization, you rely on a bit in that cliché of "I am the Hokage" and all that, but the story feels good, the Ocs who join part of the Hyuga clan do not become tiresome and they are given the right and necessary time in the story. And the protagonist, although he feels a little empty and lacking in personality, is very well defined in terms of his personality presented in a pragmatic manner without being unnecessarily cruel. Considering all that, I think it is a very entertaining and fun story to read. (Google Translate)

I'm confused... are the chapters out of order or something? the narration is strange or is it just my reading comprehension that is bad?

I don't understand this reference, can someone explain it to me?