Nevhhealast

Definitely a good start with pretty great writing, moore updates please.....................................................................

All right, only 6 chapters out at the moment that I write this review. Writing quality is 5 stars, haven't seen any grammar mistakes, and I understand everything that is said. Story Development is also 5 stars, we are introduced to the MC and his current plights, his ambitions for the future, and I like the system that the MC has been given. Haven't seen any romance or anything involving that or sex yet but based on his writing quality, I am sure that it will be top notch. Character Design is also 5 stars, the author does a good job of making you want to see the MC succeed. When introduced to a character, the author usually describes their physical appearance for a moment which is nice. Updating Stability is 5 stars, it is only the start of the series but he seems to be updating every couple of day which is nice as I admit to being a bit impatient. Finally, World Background. 5 stars, there are massive changes to the Harry Potter universe which I like due to it making things less predictable. It makes me really look forward to the next chapter. Honestly best start to a novel I have seen in a while. Please keep it up, Author! Also, thank you for the chapters

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