AkoPrimero

//Spoiler// The story, first of all, involves genderbending, from male to female. Both are reborn into the Targaryen family, one with a male gender and the other female, and they are siblings, brothers in mind. Honestly, the genderbending caught me off guard; it's a difficult topic to handle, and I don't see it being addressed much or very adequately in the story. It just seems like they became a woman because that's what was needed. Then the siblings (I say siblings because at no point does the genderbent protagonist accept themselves as a woman) "fall in love," which seemed a bit forced to me. It felt natural for one of them, but for the other... My review is based on the themes that feel forced (genderbending, "yaoi") and the strange power-up they have with tremendous talent in learning and strength. The author justifies this by saying they have Targaryen blood, mature minds, and techniques from the previous world, but it still feels unnatural

Is there any reason for the MC to hand-build an observatory other than worldly pleasures? thanks for the chapter

Atlas looks like a small child, he expects a child to have the maturity that is not proper. How old was Atlas before he died?

No, what happened has a lot of logic. It would be something similar to the Stockholm syndrome

Good

I make the wisest decision, signing a contract without knowing the other party is not logical

this is a very original beginning, keep it up!

More! More!

Izi

ash is ten years old ten years ago, age in pokemon is abstract