Rayeen_Noledo

I like the way the author write the story as well as the plot of the story. I am not a fan of this genre but I definitely recommend it to my fellow reader.

I really like how the author write story and the way she described it is awesome.. However be careful to the whole plot as you have to justify why the heroin is talking to her alter ego because it is quite unusual for a person or even a friend of the heroin to know that. The readers might feel uncomfortable and judge the character of the heroin.. So far I know that the author have a real talent and a gem.. So please keep shining...

The plot of the story is a unique one for me and how the story develop really intrigued me... I like how the author write the story not too slow and not too fast just right. Keep it up....

Wow I wish I could write the way you do... Hehehe.. I like the story.. It simple yet it does have the flexibility of situation that any person can relate to... I love it.. Keep it up ....

I love the story itself because it is really a challenge to make a fantasy story.. Fantasy stories is a thumbs up for me... And I like how the author write the story.. It is lively and definitely good at what he/she is doing.. Keep it up...

The plot of the story might have the same plot as others... But the way the author wrote it is enchanting.. I can't wait to see how the author honed it to make it his/her own story . Keep up the good work....

I have read stories with this plot but I really am excited as to how the author will own this story.. I like how the author write and I can see that it is a pure talent.. So keep up the good work..

This is the story I can relate with.. I really like the plot of the stories because it's all about family and relationship towards other person.. It really intrigued me .. Good job...

I love the story and I am a fan of fantasy genres.. I like how the author wrote the story... I am looking forward for the author first book.....

I like the plot of the story because I am open to fantasy genres... But the synopsis is a little bit off because everyone has an up's and down situation coz that's what life is.. The exciting and challenging thing is how you will justify the situation in their up and down moment.. That's what I will be looking to.. Good luck...