MrIIIo
Why dont YOU tel ME something about yourself?
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oh what?! I didnt even know this existed hahagah
oh thanks, didnt know he had one
no worries, i did laugh at your joke, judt gotta stay in role
so what are the explanations for his technique applications?
they have a reputation for it
his technique allows him to jump people...jjk's steongest ability
your dreams have b3en crushed
oh, it simply means that your mother is actually a skinwalker and she has been experimenting on you to try and create a suitable vessel for the strongest curse of the heian era. But fret not, you will probably not be the endproduct...she might still get rid of you later tho, so yeah...
lemme help you kidx the word you're looking for is...
huh, what is special grade 1?
would expose him, but tbh all three of em should already know
oooh junpei could actually br pretty good, His shikigami has a lot of versatile properties, he could probably become first grade. Maybe make some binding vows for the technique too, to make it stronger
aight, i disliked the start of the arc, but i think you built a pretty good premise for the story. There were some small plot holes and it might have bern better if some parts were more elaborated. Without the paragraph comments, i would've been confused for a lot longer.
"THIS IS TRUE LOVE"
everyone has CE, sxcept for Maki and Toji
where was this said?
so he just decided to live snd desire to die as a dog? How did this guy even get stronfer with such a mentality
maybe if you made more scenes of him just chilling with his family, but doing it so quickly adds nothing to the experience of the readers