RoarWritings

Yeah after reading the rest I already guessed so.

Starting felt like the generic start of the VR story but as I progressed the story was quite unique. The thing that I felt unusual was the game dev not having any control over their own game. It felt kinda unreal but it was need for the plot trigger so I guess its fine. Ngl the writing quality was quite good. It was emerging and easy to imagine. I liked the writing style. the only thing I felt lacking was the character design. Its my opinion tho.

Wouldn't that break the balance of the game?

Oh. But I think you mentioned him wearing yukata or something. Maybe I read it wrong.

At least you want to improve. keep it up.

Is this cat in human form or something? And is it male or female?

He just casually said lets kill some wolves?! Ain't he afraid or something?

So far it was a good read. The story is quite interesting and promising. I liked how author has represented everything. Simple yet interesting writing made me emerge into it. Keep it up. Waiting for new chaps.

The starting looks interesting and promising. But Xing being able to talk like a mature man from the birth even though he doesn't have any memory, It kinda feels weird to me. Nonetheless the story has potential. There are some grammatical and spelling mistakes. I hope writer will fix them and keep it in mind.

How did you actually write this? :/