good start, you can easy follow the story and its easy to read

creativ , your story only has 3 chapters so far but its really excelent ,to my likeing ,i hope you keep up your great work und we will see more of your works in the future ( you have a nice idea to combinier different "genres togehter i understand your idea of wonderful combination that you have created). your writing was really good in my eyes and i am looking forwards for more. my best wishes for your future entertenment [img=recommend]

Good novel, i really like the starting point , my favortite at the moment [img=recommend] hope u have fun writting as much as i like to read this ff , CCG is also 1 of my favorite once i really like the novels based on this

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Nice start keep up your great work . NOT many people choice the boys as base great choice[img=recommend] I hope and will enjoy your new chapters and wish you sone nice experience writing your story.

i did say as rukias brother gives u more room to write (time+ back ground)

u should just ignore Him . Every creator gets brainless comments Like his , often they are just 'fame' hungry Ort stupid. You do a Good job writting your story stay true to yourself and dont be influenced By idiots