Thanks for the review. If you loved the 1st volume which was written on a whim, you would definetly like the volume 2 which would be more interesting(if i could get time to write it down) since it is the volume where the book really shoots off.

maybe the world is several times bigger than earth(maybe 100x bigger)

under the adventure guild*

shouldn't it be "Need to register the guild with the adventure guild" or "Need to register the guild under ththe adventure guild", if I am not wrong

Also if I did write the book and it became famous, I will put your name in my credits section.

Sure, I personal know the pains regarding the changing of the chapter structure. I just wanted to clarify that our religion is peacefull unless angered and also take a burden from my shoulders for not addressing the misconception that some people might face regarding our religion when reading it. Also you got quite a good book and plot here. It reminds me of a long forgotten book idea that was in the back of my head.

The spoiler is that the ending is directly linked to my 1st novelByeFictionStars26(Ps-don't blame me for the Spoiler)

Edit-tenner = mind Plus I absolutely loved your vivid description of life as a god. Best of luck on your future achievements Bye FictionStars26

As a fellow writer, reader(of fiction, Nonfiction and mythologies) and Religious person, I come in peace regarding this review. I really can't find any loopholes (except 2) in this book. it has no plot loopholes and would be more popular if it was slightly more family friendly(though it is fine as it is if you don't want to change it) and the negative view on my religion(if you meant it in a fiction novel as fiction, it would be true). I am sure you might tenner the religion if you jogged your memory but I come in peace so I will end by saying our religion try to promote peace as much as possible and prevent bloodshed and corruption as much as possible(any believer who thinks otherwise is not a believer in our religion. I am sorry if you wrote that tiny context based on the media who tries to show negative stuff about our religion [if you don't want to remove it you can ignore this but if you want to and don't mind the removal you can text me about the specific part]ThanksBest Regards FictionStars(a aspiring writer and avid reader of all english texts eespecially in fiction)

I am surprised that an author could make such an interest plot on such a theme and I am saying this as a fellow author(p.s - haven't won any wenovel awards yet). I sincerely wish you luck in your writing journey as a fellow Author --F.S(FictionStars)

reminds me about a Tamil movie where a mafia don called himself rolex

this looks extremely close to a copy of a manga that I am currently reading is all I can say to an author who has published a new web novel of 1 chapter while the manga has 57 chapters

it should be propose *purpose- propose

HI guys drop your feedback on this chapter

foraging as in harvesting