so as I was reading the first part of the story , literally I didn't knew what will happen next, though I may say that is a good sign that ur story is interesting and isn't boring like other stories . I like that the mc was related lol , the mc was so scared and it was really fun to see the mc 's reactions , I want to acknowledge that the details of the mc's reaction was on point. Overall the plot was really nice , as a reader I like to theorize what will happen next and again idk what to say , it really was unexpectable to the point that I get really nervous and worried about the mc ( which is good since readers should also feel like they are in that scene . Just keep the story flow going smoothly k. And I would like to recommend that u make a synopsis , I mean attest the background so readers would tackle ur story ( since slot of readers base on the synopsis) Heyy it's me mik², lol ur so professional and really brave to post works in English, lol hope ur brain cells still work after this. But to be frank I'm here to support all the way. Sorry for posting my review a bit late, honestly I was really having trouble with my time management and I just remembered my mission to give u a review HAHAHHAHAH GOODLUCKKK YUI [img=update][img=recommend]