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Nice character development. Not a lot of world view though. Would like to see more background. Perhaps a backstory or 2. More about the sisters

nice story line

I like the story line

good story line so far

the grammar needs a lot of work. but hte storyline is well thought out and i like all the intrigue, it tends to keep you guessing. i cant wait to see what happens next

i agree

this story took a twist

i agree

i like where the story ;ine is going