Micheal_Kebede

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2021-02-10 UnidoGlobal

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Micheal_Kebede4 years ago
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The suspense is really great and the way the story begin is straight to the case which makes you intrigued right at the start. Really looking forward to the upcoming chapters
Murderer Unleashed
Urbano · Uinvited_Guest
Micheal_Kebede4 years ago
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So Far looking great. I can already feel the suspense Can't wait to see whets coming next....
Ch 5 Chapter four
Murderer Unleashed
Urbano · Uinvited_Guest
Micheal_Kebede4 years ago
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I completely agree with your statement. I plan on explaining the galaxies and the planets and sorts more as the time goes. Some of the planets maybe just for mentioning but I do plan on having a better and clear picture when it comes to the main theme of the writing (i.e. the planets, species and galaxies)
It was a cold rainy night on the year 3026, as the rain drops fill the Earth with its wet and sticky breeze. A lot has changed since the Galactic war, it has been almost 10 years now. I am currently on earth helping the rebuilding process, as the message was directed from the Galactic sphere. I was assigned to organize and repair the vessels that were used to probe new clusters. We recently discovered a planet that was almost a replica of earth in the Darak solar system. Which was home to the Konors. They joined the union after the war, in which they thought was unnecessary, but they were the first ones hit by the Absorbents and almost lost their planet to a nuclear like attack. If it wasn't for the union, the planet would have been destroyed and 95% of the Konors would have been whipped out. Since the new earth like planet wasn't inhabited by any species, it was left untouched when the invasion was over. Studies were all directed to that planet because it had a xenon surplus, which was used to replicate a type of fuel that were used to travel clusters. There were disagreements on which species would colonize the planet; Humans, Fores, Graners, Terrians and the Konors. The Humans and the Konors were the more concerned ones. Sometimes I just think why we keep on searching. Humans already colonized the entire southern galaxy, Pandora's solar system, Phoenix solar system and the Local solar system in which earth is located. We also colonized some of the south western solar systems like the Crab and Eagle Nebula named after their shapes. Ever since the first colonization on Mars, we have been obsessed with finding more planets. I stopped building ships for them because I knew we were heading to a path we couldn't return from.
The Unspoken World
Outros · Micheal_Kebede
Micheal_Kebede4 years ago
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I will adjust the quotations. I have some ideas for the flashback but I plan on introducing it later through another form. I really appreciate your feedback. Thank you very much :)
I get back to my station and start working on the Graner built gun when suddenly I hear a murmur outside the station, I walk towards my window and look outside when I see a group of crowed people surrounding an area. I walk outside and all the scientist and engineers are trying to look at a certain place. Last time I saw this many people trying to see something was when the Absorbents left their DCC tracker on earth. I started walking towards the crowd and passing my colleagues one at a time then a certain voice hits me. I kept thinking "I know this voice somewhere" as I keep walking further in the crowd the voice becomes brighter and brighter. Once I end up in the center of the crowd it was the war hero, the person that saved the galaxy, the killer of Volters. It was "Joseph Samuel". Then I remembered, he was there on Aparel when I was setting up the turrets. He was talking to the Lieutenant and the counselor of the Fores. He came to me and asked me if I needed help. I got up and said no. I was done anyway so I walked away. I sometimes think why people like him gets all the fame, respect and publicity. Without us designing the ships and recalibrating the defense systems, they would be dead in a finger snap. But after the war he earned major respect, after all a human killed not one but five Volters. Immediately after I saw him, I turn back and start walking outside the crowd and then he runs and approaches me. "Sir" he yells out, I didn't look back because I knew a war hero wouldn't be calling me sir then I hear his footsteps approaching me and says, "Sir Grayson". I was startled when I found out he was calling me, then I turn around and start to wonder why a guy like him would approach an old Engineer…
The Unspoken World
Outros · Micheal_Kebede
Micheal_Kebede4 years ago
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I actually have two characters in store. It will be more clear in the next chapter. And yes I am keeping track of everything because a lot of characters are going to be in the more the story goes
Ch 1 Chapter 1
The Unspoken World
Outros · Micheal_Kebede
Micheal_Kebede4 years ago
Respondeu a Bk1010
Thrilled to hear that :)
The Unspoken World
Outros · Micheal_Kebede
Micheal_Kebede4 years ago
Respondeu a Bisrat_K_Dessalegn
I am glad. I will continue to write more
The Unspoken World
Outros · Micheal_Kebede
Micheal_Kebede4 years ago
Postado
I have to say, after reading the first few paragraphs I wasn't expecting comedy but this is actually more than comedy, The Author has a really good imaginative mind. Would highly recommend if you like fantasy.
How I Became the Strongest Sovereign
Fantasia · TofSpades
Micheal_Kebede4 years ago
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Hello there everyone. I am very much happy with the positive reviews and I am now more motivated to write more. I would greatly appreciate your awesome support :)
The Unspoken World
Outros · Micheal_Kebede
Micheal_Kebede4 years ago
Postado
Very interesting story. Fantasy at its finest. Just finished the first chapter and on to the next one. Keep at it my friend. Will ne expecting more
The Grandmaster's Rebirth
Fantasia · Mel_Aniv

The Unspoken World

Story of the Worlds beyond ours

Micheal_Kebede · Outros

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