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Dude, I read the latest chapters and found him thinking about how satisfied he was to be with the woman he loves(Cersei) and their child. Maybe I got something wrong as I just skipped to the latest chapters and dropped, but I am sure I didn't misread.
I dropped his other story. That mc was dumb, idk if this one will follow the same formula. But that guy was stupid, he fell in love with Cersei after her betrayal, now he faces a second betrayal.
The pov shifts are not the problem. It is how retarded and aimless the mc look despite his supposed intelligence and him having watching the show.
The mc watched the show and should understand better than anyone that even family members are not to be trusted. Yet he cant even take care of that minor annoyance besides his mother. I say he strip all her power and let her live like a retired woman with no chance of betrayal. If he really cared about his mother he wouldn't have let the issue bubble up to this point. It is almost certain that she will choose her lover over him when the time comes and he could be forced to kill her. As the novel progresses, it becomes harder to understand along with the MC's motives.
No wonder Daemon treated her the way he did. He seems to have been a good charge of character🤣
Does he really think he and Aizen are genuine friends? It is stupid to be in the same squard as him.
I would have liked it if their relationship was natural and not a task from the system. Is he gonna start actively going after all these heroines?
I like the mc more in the earlier chapters, I do not like this change
It is okay to help them, but why are you trying to hook the mc up with these girls? Although I do not like him still caring about their business, I do understand that as a person who was close to them, he may feel the need to help. I know this is your own story and do not want to be questioned for the decisions you make, but making him create a harem with these girls is too much. It is okay to forgive them, but getting involved in a relationship?
So those words awakened something in you?🤣💀