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Nyamao

Nyamao

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2021-01-29 UnidoGlobal
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0.2h

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4
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6
  • Nyamao
    Nyamao2 years ago
    Postado

    The book is amazing. Few chapters but I think it will be an amazing. I have read your work and I can say this story does not disappoint. There are no grammar errors or mixing of past tenses it's just perfect.

  • Nyamao
    Nyamao2 years ago
    Postado

    Few chapters but it's coming pretty well. Would love to read more of the story so will hope for more updates. After reading your other stories I can say that it's going to be a good one so don't disappoint.

  • Nyamao
    Nyamao2 years ago
    Postado

    Amazing book writer. The story is well crafted ,it's a unique idea. The characters are well constructed and I love the way you have elaborated their behaviours. Keira is my favourite . The story is amazing overall,few mistakes work on them . Adding it to my library. Would love to read more of your work.

  • Nyamao
    Nyamao2 years ago
    Postado

    There are alot of grammar mistakes that I think you should work on. The story is good and well constructed just work on your grammar. The synopsis really confused me though. Great work.

  • Nyamao
    Nyamao2 years ago
    Postado

    I love Carla's character. The boom is short and I already want to know what will happen next. Hoping for constant update ,adding it to my library. Great work.

  • Nyamao
    Nyamao2 years ago
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    The plot of the book is amazing. The storyline is catchy and the begining of the story got me hooked. Would love to read more if the book so am adding it to my library so I can get regular updates . Good work.