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legendary_2580

legendary_2580

Lv2
2021-01-26 UnidoGlobal
29.4h

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  • legendary_2580
    legendary_25807mth
    Postado

    Hello loveing your story so far but plz updated it regularly can't wait for another chapter..........................................................

    Enlightened Son-in-law
    Urbano · Lust_Demon_Samael
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  • legendary_2580
    legendary_25801yr
    Postado

    Bro it's a good story but tell me plz is this your original story or is it translated of an mtl novel other then that i really like the story and this novel hope you don't drop it

    Store Assistant System
    Urbano · ahmed1808
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  • legendary_2580
    legendary_25801yr
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    I was pretty happy with the way the story was going until the author disappeared for one whole week but when he came back updates were not good it used to be 2 chapters a day came to one fine now like one scene is the whole chapter so i am dropping this novel but thank you the story was good but after the twins part lol didn't interest me well

    Hundred Times Income Multiplier System
    Urbano · Alan_Wafula
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  • legendary_2580
    legendary_25801yr
    Postado

    Bro where are today's chapters it's says it's updated but can't see any new chapters are you making the corrections in the previous chapters about the money

    Hundred Times Income Multiplier System
    Urbano · Alan_Wafula
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  • legendary_2580
    legendary_25801yr
    Postado

    Well let's be honest here from the start till when the main character gets married every chapter was perfect but right after that he stop the development of the story you should only focus on the main lead and people around him and yeah you can mention the characters as well but more then 50 chapters are she goes and there do this and that they should be developing everything in secret and the rise the problems for the main lead and his every day problems and how he sloves them and something I think the writer is just uploading whatever he wants this is just my opinion cuz I read a lot stories like this weither it in English or mtl this book was very fun until writer doing the side stories long thank you and sorry if l have offended any of his fans cuz just like until today I was his fan

    Stepmother: I Am Asked To Give A Kidney To My Half-Brother
    Urbano · Wind's Mark
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  • legendary_2580
    legendary_25802yr
    Comentou

    Just don't leave at mid

    Ch 3 Promise
    I am the Entertainment Tycoon
    Urbano · StarryForestJaguar
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