Gunjan_Varshney_4448
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i think author must go through the "in the cage of devil" first before writting another episode...cz this story is meaningless without strings attached with that one...
he got to know about neha after 3 years when Neha's mother called herclues to know about her daughter... after that he tortured Aryan anad Arjun to know about the whereabouts of Neha cz he thought they were the ones who hide Neha
you changed the storyline and as per my POV "in the cage of devil" is meaningless... sorry but i'm not satisfied with your concept....
and the reason why didn't he want little Hannah in his life...?? even she wasn't got any chance to hold little Hannah in her arms....
yes...
selecting the name of baby girl...discussion of Hercules and neha about nursery of Hannah... killing Hannah in the rage by hercules cz of missunderstading.... Hercules left her after making everything on it's place in his sisters life and killing Hannah.. she rejoined jerry office after her miscarriage... showing the real face of Hercules to neha...... the death of Hannah was the main reason of neha's suicide.. missunderstading that only neha and jerry knows that made hercules threw neha out of his life...
but it was mentioned that he killed little Hannah very brutally.... and jerry got to know that when she rejoined the office... i'm not disagree with the chapters.... i'm just saying if she left now and the flashback is end then it's gonna be totally different storyline
even no discussion about Hannah and her nursery between neha and hercules....even jerry got to know about her miscarriage when she rejoined his office....
when aryan met her she was pregnant and hercules threw her out when everything got right in his sisters life and so on
don't change the storyline..... cz if you change that then "in the cage of devil" story is meaningless...
even she decided the baby's name and nursery and even she had worked for Jerry at the time of pregnancy and jerry got to know about her miscarriage after she rejoin the office.
you changed the whole story... it's different with prologue and in the caged of devil.