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Mika_Carter_Davis1hPostadoOverall, the writing is solid. My issue is the unnecessary dragging of the most:the fl’s identity as an heiress of the wealthiest family. I read up until the 600th chapter, and the weak villains still exist. What’s the point of having money, power, and influence when she allows the roaches (a family that doesn’t even rank on the third tier, according to the novel) to continue with their low-level schemes?
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I’m sorry, but those who pity the villains are weak because they neither sympathize nor empathize with their “victims”; so, it’s wise to use a heavy with them because they wouldn’t be soft.
His words stunned Silas. Phill's loyalty to Colton was so intense that he was willing to face the punishment alone, but not to let him suffer. His loyalty and dedication made Silas reconsider. - Mika_Carter_Davis1dComentou
The reveal was anticlimactic regarding Linda. All these chapters with her schemes and lengthy verbal insults, the end is a “no” and a quiet whisked away? It would be nice to show her mental breakdown after she learned about Kathleen’s true identity.
Ch 296 The Announcement - Mika_Carter_Davis1dComentou
No, she should be in jail for kidnapping Kathleen.
"She is a disgrace to womanhood and should be banned from society." - Mika_Carter_Davis1dComentou
*classified not classy information
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*failing (not flaunting) to complete my orders
"Shut up you dimwit. You should have thought about it before flaunting my orders." - Mika_Carter_Davis1dComentou
Wasn’t Mabel the assistant to Linda at the beginning of the story?
"Oh you didn't know, she was caught cheating on her husband, and got chased out of her husband's house." Mabel Winters, Linda's estranged friend whispered loudly. - Mika_Carter_Davis1dComentou
*butted not buted
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I thought the boss of the Dark Organization “took care” of Linda.
Linda took the opportunity to approach Kathleen, a sly look on her face. - Mika_Carter_Davis1dComentou
I guess the author remembered the banquet after all. It took long enough; one month in this book spans almost two hundred chapters.
It was finally the day of the banquet organized by Director Wyatt to introduce Kathleen to the public as her long lost daughter and heiress. - Mika_Carter_Davis1dComentouCh 284 Are You A Bad Person?
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*bellied not belied
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Oh, so you do have some self-awareness.
"But truth be told, even if she had told me, I would have taken it as her spewing nonsense. It would have been practically impossible to believe such a ridiculous claim from Kathleen seeing the way it took Mrs Wyatt's statement to convince me at their residence." - Mika_Carter_Davis1dComentou
You wouldn’t have believed her then just like now.
Why didn't Kathleen tell her that day at Wyatt Corporations that she was the daughter of Director Wyatt? It would have saved her today's embarrassment. - Mika_Carter_Davis1dComentou
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"Anyone can see that you do not segregate between servants and masters which is a rare virtue to find among the wealthy," she laughed, the smile on her face never wavering. - Mika_Carter_Davis1dComentou
Really? You’re too arrogant; Linda screwed you over more than once, with each worst than the last.
"Like I always say, they are a bunch of small fries and bees. They can only buzz around but can't sting." - Mika_Carter_Davis2dComentou
I thought there was a banquet planned to announce Kathleen’s identity as Janice Wyatt. The author mentioned this earlier in the book wherein it was a month away; it seems the writer forgot just to prolong the worst kept secret. Kathleen looks like her mother, father, and brother with distinct features (e.g., face, eyes, hair), yet no one can see the obvious.
Ch 267 We Don’t Need To Let Out All Our Cards - Mika_Carter_Davis2dComentou
*soothed not sooted
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*Their IQs are exceptionally high.
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