Don't listen to those edgy 13-year-olds. it's believable that a normal person who has never seen death before would do something like that, in that situation, with the amount of time he was given to make a decision(just a few secs)

it's bad the first chapter was actually ok, but after that, it turned into something maybe written by a 10-year-old @@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@22

thanks for the heads up

(God)

Great

good

It's great but please continue writing.

The start was good but then they changed the MC's personality and turned her into an emotional wreck.

The start was great then it went downhill

It's great

way too much edgy

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