The story is captivating, an ideal webnovel for fans of the harem genre, topped with an evil and overpowered main character. So far, the narrative is progressing nicely and shows great potential. Well done.
This story has an interesting premise, and after reading a few chapters so far, I can say that I like the direction it is going in. There aren't many mistakes, and the ones that are there, it's minor. I also like the MC of the story, the concept, and the setting, especially the world building. Overall, it's going well so far, keep up the good work and good luck!