roamingsaber

I have got to say, this is a pristine work of art. The flow of the story, the intricacy of the background, the emotions of the characters and most important of all, the fricking plot, it's like a drug, you just get addicted to it, especially in the second volume. The first volume was surely lackluster and did not get me attached, but the second volume is the best work I've read on webnovel. The first volume does it's best to establish the world's background and to solidify the mc's relationships but the second volume, OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!. It has everything you could want I just felt like kissing the story, how does one write so good. This novel is godly. My only complaints were that the power system does not seem too solidified, there are a few loopholes regarding it to further enhance the impact of the scene, but still I hope the author's sees to this and tries to something about it. Another thing is that sometimes the characters act out of sync, they do not act according to their established personalities and again, this is done to enrich the scene. But if this continues the novel is going to feel different and the originality which made it so unique would be missing. I sincerely hope the author looks at all this and gives us the best story on this platform. All the best guiltythree

Beware of the Parent wolf

A strict father asking about what class his son is going to choose in the game, this sounds like a dream

why always old men

just supporting the author ggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg

I think it's "once a vessel get's destroyed"

I feel like the dialogues between eve and god was too short and some more feelings could have been added and when eve dies adam could have shown more feelings as the dialogue was pretty plain

I think it's make instead of made in the last line

it's a fricking cake

IS it icecream