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Well I guess I’ll do a realistic review myself though as the author I may be a bit biased. I do think this novel is worth a read to anyone who enjoys Pokemon fanfics. I know it’s not perfect and could definitely be improved in a number of ways but I feel it has been getting better as a imwrite more a more. My punctuation and grammar aren’t perfect but compared to a lot of other novels I feel that it is better than average. I also try to use a wide variety of descriptive words so the story isn’t repetitive and I add pictures of important characters.

I apologize like I said new writer and I do all my own editing I try to make it as grammatically correct as I can but sometimes stuff slips through. But thanks you for the comment I genuinely appreciate it as I want to make this as good a novel as I can hope you stick around and help keep me honest and push me to do better

Thanks for letting me know I corrected it

Also his father did preface it wants a real title more a rumor, legend, a dream for trainers to aspire to sort of like how we call athletes GOATs it’s not a real title but something only a few have the potential to earn

Because the protagonist becomes the first one and this is his story/ tale

Pidgeot is his fathers fastest Pokemon but there are other faster Pokemon out there. He is referring to the ability speed boost which like in games raises the Pokémon’s speed in battle. It also has extra effects in this universe in general that hasn’t come up yet as Lucas hasn’t had enough experience with Pokémon’s abilities to realize that this universe is different than the game

Tom

Angela