David_Green_6172

I'm kind of glad as now there's even number chapters for a story that publishers 2 at a time.

what???

I've gotten to chapter 19 the MC is very relatable with the whole learn magic because magic is magic. it so fast seems very fun and I'm looking forward to continuing

this seems to be stolen. age of men by cloud9stories on fanfiction website. considering most of it was posted on the same day, I have my doubts that it'll change into being a spin-off based on it. if I'm wrong having not read further than the first couple parts of the first chapter then feel free to reply and I'll take down this review

check his harddrive

maybe he didn't know he's a wraith

3rd class was how it was described

has the potential to be really good with a good plot and be an all around fun story to read, but every now and then something will pop up that is mindlessly dumb that if the author thought about the words they wrote they could have changed it in seconds. e.g. MC travels 10m/s for 12 seconds to reach a destination a 51 minute bus ride away. 10m/s for 12 seconds is 120 meters which is a bit less than 400 ft. now if they changed it to 5 minutes or something, it would have been made that much easier to read. also a character of given an age of 100 being born in 1922, meaning the year is 2022 when plot events were in ~2011 which just feels like author was lazy and just chose 100 because it was a big number.