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The book has very few chapters but with every book that you read you learn something. The book is amazing and the author did great work so I would tell her what to change it doesn't mean that the book is bad. The synopsis and the cover of the book determine if someone will be interested in the book so I would hope that the author works on making another cover and going through the synopsis to find something that will pull readers. Hope I don't disrespect you with any of this.
Love the book. The writer's work is impeccable and would love to read more of his work. Though I have something to point out. One of my readers mentioned some time back that when the paragraphs are too long it's hard for someone to concentrate on the book they get distracted easily. Just from the synopsis, I saw that because I didn't see if there were paragraphs it was just one long chapter which might discourage lazy readers. Great work though keep up.
I love the book. The grammar is on a pint and I haven't seen any mistakes but I have some things to point out. In the beginning of the faster chapter you didn't say who'sPOV it was. Like some people might get confused. So it would be nice if at the beginning of each chapter you say who'sPOv it is. Otherwise it's a great book.