knightInSpikyArmor
Lv3
2020-12-27 UnidoGlobal
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knightInSpikyArmor2hComentouImmerssive: it's not bad
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Action/fights
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Just right: but nothing really happens
Comment - knightInSpikyArmor3hComentou
Average: Lot of the interssting things that happned in the main HXH is missing in this fic
Comment - knightInSpikyArmor3hComentou
No: I don't feel like i should care about any side-character specially the OCs, maybe add differant POVs nd give them differant goals etc... specialy Nicloas as he's supposed to be Yuuma's Killua, maybe give him his own arc
Comment - knightInSpikyArmor3hComentou
Neutral: He does not have a clear or intersting goal
Comment - knightInSpikyArmor1dComentou
Ruler!?
Getting into the city was an easy process as they simply took my name, 'Lin Fan' and I had to give a small coin to enter the city. I was the ruler and Supreme General of Unified China so i did not lack the money. And to my convenience, Tibet and China shared the same currency. - knightInSpikyArmor1dComentou"Hmm," she hummed, studying the cards carefully. "I see many women in your future, each one with a love that will shape your destiny in different ways."
- knightInSpikyArmor2dComentouThe realization came to him the moment he said those words, a malicious smile forming on his lips.
- knightInSpikyArmor3dComentou"The situation requires discretion and precision," Edgar continued, his fingers steepling together as he locked eyes with Noir. "The Japanese seem to have created their own superhuman, which means they managed to create their own version of compound V."
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-1000 aura
With a deep breath, Kai put on the heavy helmet, although the helmet was still too big for him not to mention how hideous it looked, it was a requirement as Jaggarnaut's helmet had similar properties to Magneto's helmet making it an anti-telepathic device. - knightInSpikyArmor7dComentouCh 17 York New City Part 2 Assignment
- knightInSpikyArmor9dComentouCh 15 New Horizon
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wasn't he a specialist? (chapter1)
"So, you fall under Emission and Manipulation. It seems Emission is your main affinity. - knightInSpikyArmor9dComentou
bruh, he could've just left...
The examiners rushed to Bodoro's aid, while the other contestants and spectators looked on in shock. Illumi watched from the arena, his face as emotionless as ever. He had achieved what he set out to do, and now Killua was on the path he had chosen for him. - knightInSpikyArmor9dComentouCh 13 The Nearing Of The End
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R.I.P
A month before his eighteenth birthday, the old butler, Robert Jones, passed away due to old age and overwork. - knightInSpikyArmor14dComentou
But of course...
[Race: Human/?] - knightInSpikyArmor16dComentouCh 27 Carnage