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Ha. If you wait for someone to recover from PTSD you will be there your whole life. Anything can trigger it, smell, sight, sometimes taste.

Trousers?

This is prime example of just reread what you wrote to see if it makes sense. I have no idea what your trying to say. Also it’s sit. Seat is was you sit on.

I really wish author would reread what they wrote, not what they wanted to write. There is so many small issues that could be easily fixed. I keep complaining, I know. I should stop reading it. I like the idea of the story but get so frustrated reading it. It’s like trying to read a story written by a kid that does not know how to spell and does not keep their thoughts straight.

It’s so inconsistent. Flash back of father dead said she had brother, but aunt and cousin all she had left. Pretty sure she is suppose to have brother, cousin, aunt… but who knows

Past and future in one sentence…

If you do as this describes it goes from screaming to ahhhh like at drs office. This changes the feel for me. I would just take the pulling tongue forwards out.

I’m sure the author doesn’t realize all their spelling mistakes. Readying instead of reading, bumbed instead of bumped, etc. I have audio and visual dyslexia and get that, but if we are having to pay to read, it would be nice to have a proofreader so it’s easier on us. I have to Google and try to figure out what word would fit here instead of the word you use. Some are easy, some just confuse me and I have to ask someone to read it and what word do they mean to use.

I gat you? I’m hoping this is not full of slang of improper spelling. As a dyslexic I hate not being able to figure out what I am reading.

Neck….heart same thing. 🤷🏻‍♀️ Seriously scroll up a little if you forgot where she had her first kill author.