Lord_Nyx

you don't answer someone who just asked about what you were just doing in that manner when they correctly guessed it... you say "Indeed, it is (add name)"

maybe this story needs to be 'continued' with a character within the universe they created.... where they are the deities and they each bless a 'chosen' being.

If you want a well written story with cohesive and compelling character design, readable dialogue, and a world that you could see yourself in, this is not that story.

this whole paragraph is confusing

I understand that this is a cultivation novel, but there are too many grammar mistakes and typos throughout the story; which is making it difficult to read.

there is an unspoken rule of storywriting: never insert yourself into your own fiction. The reason is because it causes a massive disruption in the fictitious setting that has been created.

My D&D knowledge confirms that this is constitution

this paragraph starts with a major error

there are still several spelling errors

Truck-kun is as cliche as it gets