yea your right. I have noo idea how to write a realistic romance cuz I'm only 13 and I've never been in love but in the next few chapters, I'm pretty sure I slowed it down. I don't remember but thanks for pointing that out! I'm still editing the chapters but I haven't really had time but I'll get to it asap!!

Oh, I'm sorry. I didn't think to upload something like that. Do you think it would help if I put a chapter just summarizing everything that happened until the story starts? Thank you for pointing that out though. I really appreciate it!

Sorry, I can't see where you posted this comment. Were you talking about the first paragraph of the story? Cuz if you were, it's supposed to be like it, and thank you for telling me that it was confusing! But if it wasn't, I'll definitely change it.

I really liked this story. I'm usually not into reading horror stories but this one was really good. Great job, keep writing, and thank you for helping me as well!!

lol no. Aang is definitely dead. But there will be more romance as I get closer. this is pretty slow-burn tho.

Thanks for pointing that out!

Of course not! I want you to do it, or I won't be able to get better. I feel bad about doing it to you too so maybe we could both just correct whatever we want about each other without feeling bad or being angry ha

Chapter 6. I didn't know how to write her in but people asked me to so it's a little farther in.

aww

ok now im sad. And fun fact he's the same age as my older sis!

Some sort of punctuation after dad. lol sry

Period after "Alright"

He had a phone at 7?? Luckyyy

That's everyone's thoughts rn lol.

Can you tell me the title of the story or link it because I literally just joined this website today and I have NO idea how to navigate this thing.

Of course! I would love to. Thank you!

THANK YOU!!! I was trying to edit but it's hard to pick out errors. I was thinking, if you don't mind, could you look over my future chapters after im done editing these ones? I completely understand if you're too busy or can't do this. But please consider it. I could really use someone like you.[img=recommend]

aww thank you. It's been a long time since I've written this, so I definetley need to review it and get rid of typos and small plot holes. I was gonna ask someone to be my beta but I forgot. Thank you for pointing this out tho!

lolll

Yea, it's a fanfic. It just wouldn't let me upload it as a fanfic so I had to say it was a novel.