........................................it's dogshit.

.................................................................................................................................................its wack.......

Action, nice scenes, good amount of detail. The story hardly gets boring at times. It's great.

Exciting story! we just need more chapters!

The holy grail of stories. It's worth a read and you probably won't stop!

NTR warning stay away. Even if it just semi-NTR to some people, it's still NTR at the end of the day. Author won't be changing it. Let's all help by giving it a fail speed run lmao. Go read something else more worth your time and energy.

You know what's wrong with it....................................... .........................................................just so much.

beginning chapters filled with drama and nonsense. mostly the mc is a beta, and I even forgot at times that he was reincarnated with his age being older. The story is whatever with uneeded drama

I barely saw this little rat comment lol, it was poorly written dumbass, in regards to the emotional writing of the feeling of death, he almost died. It was a poorly written chapter in this aspect, get outta here lmao

This Arc was and is weird no doubt but thnx for the chapter

I just read until I hit the paywall, anyway the beginning chapters are clunky with the grammar, and some errors. The story was Alright nothing really notable, read a few chapters to get a feel then decide to continue or not. There are more stories that are in depth in my opinion and allot more smoother with the writing.

Calling us ragefucks lmao, its ok to defend and debate. It was poorly written in regards with the emotions it did not seem as real even with life and death involved thats it.

Pretty good. Liked how we still have the same MC from the other novel which is cool. Grammar is good, and the writing seems fluent with a steady pace with the story. Good detail as well, give it a try.

Its Okay..................................Writing alright........short chapters...............slow progress.................interesting plot.......

Reading chapter 4 again didn't read 18 because I am not reading this book anymore as I will just move on to others so its cool you don't have to change it on my account. Anyway I read it, so the 🪓 has a soul, A Soul, he can feel, he can have emotions and is not a "Toy" as you would call it, its like a spirit with a "Being" in it. It is not just toy play especially when the axe can "Roar" lol so you can't blame people that considered that the MC got cucked espically when he watched at first though before you changed it which still feels like nothing at all like "Toy play"... Anyway thats enough from me.

Yeah it was NTR you can say its not but it was, be it curiosity or not, and if a lot off people are "complaining" about this chapter then that must tell you something.

You can tell the improvement with each chapter, little by little when compared to the very first chapters which is understandable to me. Very nice plot and scenes, looking forward to more.

Without a doubt one of the most intriguing, plot and R-18 scenes that just grabs my attention, with great grammar. Liked the battle scenes which was great to read in these kind of stories as well.

Surprised me with great grammar, and plot which kept me intrigued with the story development and actually could not stop reading until I caught up. Keep up the good work.

Just spouting bulls*** lol