Love co conquers all

Excellent

Nice start

Okay going good so far

Change in story line is diffetent. I will try change in story.

Keep going. Love story line

Love it still. Didn't too much like Logan's pov. Maybe he's too involved already. Or maybe not ready for his insight. But it was beautiful just the same to see a guy who feels and likes I instantly

Nice girl. You go

Okay, beautiful start. Hope it continues on this trend.

I think story taking long to unfold but story still great and writing excellent

I love the characters and the build up of story lines. She is a new writer and I support her style. I hope she continues regular updates to fill my appetite. Character description of clothing and location is vague but a clear description of characters emotions is great.

What is this guy problem

He is so funny

A plot seems to be there with half sentenses

Good story anticipating continuation