I like the mixture of english and muslim language, I've never seen this type of story and I'm impressed, it makes me more interested to learn more about muslim culture.

Very interesting story, good first person narration, interesting characters and good grammar. The author did an amazing job, keep doing an good job.

Even though I don't like this type of stories, the author did a great job narrating the erotic actions, but you think that the dialogues are part the action or narration, the author should make the dialogues more distinguishable. But other than that, keep doing a good job.

The story is great. The grammar is great, the author knows how to express their emotions by words, characters are interesting and an interesting concept.

Quite an interesting story, it makes me keep reading more and more. The grammar is great and the characters interesting. Even though I don't like reading horror/thriller stories I actually like this one a lot.

Interesting story, good sypnosis, good grammar, in other words. A good book! Definitely would continue reading it in my free time, keep doing your best.

Amazing story! Made me shiver a lot of times, great grammar and I would definitely suggest this to my friends. Keep it going, you're doing well.

Interesting story for me, I would definetely recommend my friends this story. The grammar was fine and character were too, I'll keep reading this story.

Very interesting story! It kept intrigging me, the story and characters. The grammar is great and the main character has an interesting past. I'll definetely keep reading it!

Quite an interesting novel, the characters were interesting, the story was also interesting, but the grammar could improve just a ittle bit, other than that I would recommend it to my english friends.