Love the pace, and characters and love how easily it reads away. The only comment I'd give is there's a lot of swearing and I want more! I'm in love with the fact that both pov's are written <3

waiting for more!

bruh he really said "Dibs"

at least he has manners

he better lives up to this build up so far

Can't wait as well, he escalates quickly

Me all the time :')

those are the best friendships tbh

Love how this is reading, curious about where this will lead

:')

girl my anger issues could never

Girl NO

Guess we all have that person we wish we could swap with..

so relatable.

Well written, right into action and captivating. I look forward to reading the rest of this story. The characters are very different but interesting in their own way.

Reads away easy, love the story idea itself, great for people who try to get into English reading ad overall nicely done as far as I've read it.

Although I haven't read all of it yet, I liked reading the story. I have a few comments, like why are the chapter names in Spanish, but it reads away easy, the lack of details belong within the style of writing and is great for people who just start with reading English stories.

ahh thank you so much! I really try to do that indeed !

I did a check on the chapter, is it better?

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