Comes with the territory unfortunately it is very hard to change lots of text for a translation of a very efficient language since every sentence could possibly give out multiple meanings even having it the way we have it now is a miracle lol

It’s fine there is a lot of typo’s and chapters that are entirely bolded also big mistake with the mc knowing the OG story due to the fact that the knowledge would instantly blow up his head and also how did he transmigrate is he similar to the ancient sun god and that he simply fell into a slumber then awoke within the chaos sea (but in a different place for the mc) or did the mc get the cocoon treatment? If so why didn’t he awake from book two since it would be more interesting to have a main character who is part of the transmigators “Curly Haired Baboon Society” Also did you know that the Mythical form of the Lawyer pathway is the Curly Haired Baboon?

Ban Him #Panic#

This is genuinely awful, garbage, trash. These are people who have been in the dungeons for years seen so many die and killed so many as well yet they lose their composure so easily and make so much mistakes like beginners instead of doing tactics they blindly attack the monster while having to protect people letting them fall like domino’s and putting everyone in harms way how is this written this terribly? Even if this were to be too strong they should have been privy to the fact they might need to sacrifice themselves years earlier but damn I’m out faster than the flash can run across the world

No he isn’t I don’t even read fanfics anymore Im just here to tell you that

Beru is uhhhh is uhhhhh very obvious and uncreative name

Good for you

Well not really he has memories of things just not personalized ones like knowledge of the iPhone and how it works but not you using it or seeing anyone use it or another example you knowing how to fly a plane but not knowing how you do or what you did to know how to fly but you just know how it does sorry if this is confusing

He’s not really important enough for a full on introduction I’m guessing so I’m just imagining him as alfred but instead of white hair it’s brown

Have you ever thought those memories are no longer in his head? If he can’t remember them it’s probably for the better since it’ll be unimportant for anything but future events that will happen in the real world which I’m guessing the mc won’t worry about for a while

Eh that way he still got a boon and 0 responsibilities

I say hello to my fellow member of the No-Harem sect

Bro did you really call the homunculi the seven deadly sins💀💀💀💀

Unique scene breaks with the series of numbers and symbols at first I thought this was a secret message from the zodiac killer but it’s growing on me but this is kinda weird with the third person first person mix kinda? But I’m fine with it so far the fanfic is good

Probably make this an Auxilary chapter since that’s what it was basically made for

Bro I am absolutely disgusted with how you format your “ “ instead of doing “Hello” you do “ Hello “ and it makes me want to kill myself

Bro it’s legit probability control but worded differently while someone with probability control can say I have a 100% percent chance of being a god within the next 5 seconds someone with the ability to control failure can say there’s a 100% chance I fail not being a god in the next 5 seconds it’s the same exact thing just different wording

Probability due to how it works he could even make it 1 50% chance of something happening im only guessing this cause he says a 100% chance meaning he could change the percentage in other ways

Civilians have chakra everyone does just not enough to use jutsu or atleast strong ones