Dragon_keeper2408

over half the flipping story is nothing but a side arc and is useless I suggest people to read other books/fanfic instead if this one as thier is basically no story worth reading here it was good and decently ok side arc at the beginning but at this point this story is just bad and im not really one to give bad reviews or even suggest different books because I believe that while my opinion matters is should either only give a good review because even if I dont like the story I can just not make a reveiw and move on but this thing as just horendous to read and most of the world background was already their considered this book is a fan fic thier is way better stories out their and if suggest you look else where

so I dont think their is any worry for this fic not being chosen so I will choose reaper as second and brawen the rwby ravens mc fic as 3rd

I agree dxd first but maybe we can get fairytail I little later in the story as fairy tail kitties need saveing too

if copy plz do us all a favor and remove this book if you have permission or your the original author just with deffrent account plz say it as you can and will piss a lot of people off but plz be truthful im going to give you a chance but you can quickly lose it as I realy liked the original book

so I have not read this chapter yet or anywhere near close but maybe if you struggleing with fund from webnovel try scribble hub or wattpad as both as for as I know are free to use on both fronts so free reading and writing for the writers just a suggestion Idk it up to you though

I read the book before you decided to rewrite if though it was great can you continue the rewrite or are you out of creative thoughts to rewrite/bored with this book and if you are bored with this book can you maybe if possible post the old version in a diffrent book as I think a lot of people would like if you so even with the old versions minor error here and there in my opinion

so suggestion can you post the old version for people to read if they want to as some people like to compare and see the progress of a book plus you deleting the whole book and rewriting it here is messing with comments on the about book page

from what I remember it was great I hope this revision makes it better but author if it possible can you please post the old version as it's own story for new readers to read

great story still also author if you get the chance can you included cockvore like shoveing someone down the mc's dick and have them turn to sum or like just bath in the Mac's balls or whatever you want to call the main charaters cum makers anyway great story and if hope you are doing ok and fine I have had too many authors quit on a story because of stress and not takeing care of them self so plz keep your self healthy in sure the other readers wont mind plus breaks help you stay creative

its fine I hope that all goes well and you font have to worry about anything serious and good luck is always great too so good luck with the week