Anonny_Anonymous

Ooh, I bet Brad wants to throw down! lol

“The main cast members all submitted themselves for supporting acting nominations at the Emmys until 2002, when they submitted themselves for lead acting.” According to wiki. I never heard there was drama behind the scenes that they wanted Lead Acting nominations. Is that true? Or did you make that up for this fic? Juicy drama, if so.

Some amazing songs from the 70s that would fit The Jackson Five: “Always and Forever” by Heatwave, “Love Train” by The O’Jays, “You Make Me Feel Brand New” by The Stylistics, “This Will Be” by Natalie Cole, “Lovin’ You” by Minnie Ripperton, “Let’s Stay Together” by Al Green, “Got to Give It Up” by Marvin Gaye, “Higher Ground”, “Superstition”, “I Wish”, “Lately” “Pastime Paradise”, “Isnt She Lovely” by Stevie Wonder, “Lean On Me” by Bill Withers, “September” by Earth, Wind, and Fire; “Stayin’ Alive”, “You Should Be Dancing”, “How Deep Is Your Love” by The Bee Gees; “You Make My Dreams Come True”, “Rich Girl”, “Sara Smile”, “I can’t go for that” by Hall & Oates

Are you gonna have him write the Jackson Five hits? That’d certainly make them a lot wealthier. A lot of the money comes from songwriting. As much as I like people like Berry Gordy and people like that (who wrote I Want You Back), why let them get rich when you can have your family get that money? It’s not like they’ll be hurting. Berry Gordy owns Motown. And those songwriters have plenty of other groups to work with.

I think you should do what inspires you. That’s just my constructive criticism. If you feel the fic is better the other way, I strongly encourage you to keep writing the way you want. Keep up the great work!

Correction: Sean Cassidy’s code name was NOT Havok in canon. It was Banshee. Havok was the code name for Alex Summers.

He should stop rushing at full speed and burning through his entire chakra reserves. In canon, Kakashi and Rin manage to make it out okay. No need to rush to them. Just get far enough away and burrow underground.

I’d like to know what they’re using to power the suit. Tony Stark had the arc reactor. As we learned from his competitors, they didn’t have a power source that could run a suit that could do what Tony’s did. I don’t think the technology is there in this world. I can believe some magical serum, but beyond that? I don’t think so.

I don’t mind the system. I just don’t like the little pep talks it keeps giving the MC.

Awesome! I’m glad you’re making him a multi-instrumentalist.