Shibou_Kurai

Really interesting story... I like it [img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it]

I'll balance this... Each bad review without a good reason, I'll give another 5 stars. If u want review, say what I didn't like and how to improve, that's the basic. And say I don't like it, cuz it's BL. I don't like a lot of things and don't go on every fanfic disliking it.

Just take a look on my last comment.

Idk how advanced are you in chapters, but I would love see, when Soren talk about his cat life. I think too, Soren should tell Clark about his power, Soren need believe more on Clark. Thank you for this amazing chapters in a row!

I think u can delete it, or something else.

Go find a pussy to fuck and don't waste your time trash talking others. U should waste ur time in this shit game MLBB, full of kids like u

Do you have a schedule? Can u send it?

Good story, I like it! [img=Feeling it] However, I almost always like BL story. [img=Smitten] I'll be waiting more chaps. [img=More pls] And please don't worry about the others saying about your fanfic... Here always have toxic people. [img=Your move]

A lot of questions... 1- What happened with the 3 beasts? He used gluttony on them? 2- What is his real name? Sephiroth or Severith? 3- What he did with the "cute" beasts from last chapter? He ate the beast who attacked them? 4- Azura is now the system? 5- Bloodline suppression didn't should be a passive skill? Now a tip - Use less the MC name instead use others pronouns: He, His, Him. Use others words too: "The small dragon", etc

Thank you for the chap. #JettxGonxKillua