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It’s normal, we evolve and writing isn’t easy. I do like your plot, and I’ll admit that it was maybe too soon to criticize anything (since I just read a few chapters), so please don’t take my words too seriously!

This book is actually really good, and do believe me when I say that I’m really picky about what I read. Overall, I gotta admit that it’s cliché, but the kind that I like (revenge, a devoted hubby, a strong FL, etc, you know what I mean). It also has plot twists and an interesting development that will get you hooked to the story and their characters. Author, tho there are some small grammatical mistakes (we all have), you truly did a good job 💕

I started reading this because the reviews said that this story was awesome, but as I started to read it was rather a bit disappointing. I believe that this story is not actually that bad, referring to plot-wise it’s interesting and quite new, but the pace felt off, it was too fast for me, rushed. The writing felt off sometimes, and a bit too much (like for example in the first chapter when the FL said something about her ocean eyes or something like that). I want to clarify that I’m not trying to hate on you (author), I felt that this story is good (since even if I felt a bit uncomfortable with the story, the plot was interesting enough as to making me read through), so I wanted to point out some things that may help you improve. And I‘m sorry if I came off as rude, if you felt offended do tell me!

No worries author!! <3

Author, I think you can word this differently, as the word hand and the possessives pronouns repeat a lot, like you can say: “he held her hand in his and brought it to his lips, kissing the back of her hand, treating her as if she were made of glass”. I say this with all my respect, I really love this book and I think that this story is amazing!! Fighting❤️! (I know how hard it is to make a story and make it to have sense, you have my respect!✨)

WAAAAAAAAH FINALLY🤧🤧

I hoped Katia could be a really nice ex but I see that’s not the case :’(

So far I am loving this book, it’s refreshing and different and the story is interesting, there’s a lot of secrets to unveil! Neoma is really funny lol

Yeah, you see, this plan will be beneficial for Daryn lol, not for you

Run, if I were you I would run away as fast as possible from Azura