Ohhh my the lady got claws and it’s wrapped around a bears throat well done for this chapter

Well then first chapter was a doozy of emotions and morals the father well the main boss within his selfish ways just want a gremlin of his line roaming around. Even though she’s into that mafia she wants a husband to be faithful to just one woman and now she sees how her father-in-law is just as selfish as her husband. Jolly good show read

So 60 is middle age huh?…. Wow

Hmmm 1k to trial a powerful figure of town which may lead me to my death reconsider detective……

Indeed about the familiarities but he must be stout

this chapter brings in the normal side of the job and the time of relaxation and no fearing not waking the next day. Leo you go man if you have a thing for her well don't wait too long bud.

cute but you knew that keep it up miss

don't doubt the sassy woman she gets it done

the story for now I think take place still in the past and the character development is rising to the occasion the writing is easy to understand and it is worth to read good job with these chapter keep it up.

the coming of age ceremony even in fantasy the main character always must show their worth. chapter 3 was interesting to behold continue to inspire and keep up the good work

hmm the story has promise but the thing sort of confused me is are they keep dying and come back to life or there are two stories explaining one story back and forth. it has promise but it seems chaotic to me as I read it but it was a good read though.

No Ramsey

Don't screw this up little man, make it last little Leo. For this chapter i sense tension between them but who knows the story might get a little heated in the future. Stay tuned

ohohoo he was beginning to enjoy it, but he wants to keep his character in check he turns it off. we know you like it.

a silent and stern type well then rip out the radio you goof.

omy Kiesha got sass I like her already and plus she a computer bug. Yeah, her bestie got my respect. Just hoping that Arya is not putting too much of a risk of asking for her help.

The story makes you want to read more and the intenseness of reading deeper of the story make you think come on jumps scare me already the intensity is killing me then woosh there's the part you were waiting for and now have to wait until the next ordeal to commence.

awe that was nice of Alec too out of nowhere save Arya. the new character that has been introduced brings in some mystery. Stern but calm tall but thoughtful and pale might be albino who knows. hope the continuation of this story.

the plot thickens when someone thinks they can scare someone who eats life threats for breakfast. it's getting thicker

as the reader is reading the character having mental break down about a fantasy life. this still show that Arya don't think this is real. who knows?