DoctorBlaze

As compared to the author saying they don't know English and is google translating everything. I'm honestly shocked how readable it is, so stop complaining over something so minuscule, just drop it if you can't handle it.

It's possible that reincarnating doesn't allow this natural hardwiring to occur, it depends on how the reincarnation is done. If the MC reincarnated into the 7 year old kid, then his memories/personality would need to be fit inside the brain of a 7 year old, which would cause all sorts of issues. Something would have to give, so he'd likely have to experience the emotional issues/irrationality most kids go through. This doesn't mean he'd inherit the hardwired attachment to his bodies birth parents, but I don't understand that much about how it works so I can't speak much about it. What likely happened from the context is he got some memories of the kid, but his personality is the dominant, so initially he'd have no attachments to the parents. From what I understand attachments, they don't just happen spontaneously, and erasing everything of that kid by reincarnating at 7 years old would reset this progress. Additionally with the personality of an adult, it'd be harder to get attached as he would have a more independent personality. Although if its been about 4 years he'd likely get some attachment to them, but there may be an underlying issue of disassociation, feeling like you dont belong, etc. This might be part of the reason that the MC didn't say anything to his parents if taken realistically, because he'd fear their response, and would worsen his existing mental issues with assuming the mental stability, memories, and body of a child. So I agree with you, he likely is suffering from some mental issues, I mean who wouldn't in this circumstance.

The writing quality is abysmal, either English is not the author's main language, or they didn't put a lot of effort in. Many of these issues could've been adverted with basic grammar checking software or a proof reader. The story development is very hard to follow, and is held down significantly by the writing quality, if I can barely slog through a chapter then its fairly difficult to follow the overall story. The characters are very surface level, an issue with the extremely lacking dialogue, both in quantity and quality. Being a fanfic would normally help, but somehow the author fumbles the bag even with that. As for world background, it isn't that great. The novel itself is a fanfic so it has most of the work done for it, but any expansion of the world by the author, one of the main points of a fanfic, was executed poorly. Concepts are just introduced, with no real explanation, the magic system is just said to work some way with no real depth when introduced. For example: in the beginning it is alluded to that the MC uses some method to grow in magic ability, but it is hard to follow, and an explanation is stashed in a random paragraph mentioning meditation techniques or something about a couple chapters later. TL;DR This novel is mediocre, with poor writing quality, and not worth your time. The concept is interesting but executed poorly.

Wait until she hears you can just setup an LLC and straight up buy bodies from a morgue.

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For anyone wondering why this novel is so short, it's because I have long since abandoned it, I may come back to writing, but I just don't have the time anymore.

Perhaps the store clerk knows of his future self, so he's referring to the present from the future which would be the past relatively, thus "had" is correct.

I haven't read far enough to know if you got the PC, but if you are struggling to write on a phone, there are some bluetooth keyboards that you can connect to a phone, they would be far cheaper than a pc. Although at the same time you have to consider the cost you have to spend that you could put towards saving for the pc. If you don't plan on gaming much on the pc you could aim for a chromebook, those are pretty cheap and laptops are nice to have. Also I haven't commented much on this novel, it's been a while and I've just gotten to binging a couple chapters, not really interested in commenting about the math/realism of the novel anymore and will just enjoy it.

That isn't how a vaccine works, but sure maybe just some advanced medicine with the name "vaccine" slapped on it.