Dapper_san00

he's delulu

Honestly, not my cup of tea, but the writing was excellent and got me hooked. The progression of the story was stable, and I was able to delve into the story pretty well. I'm just a bit irked by the name of the MC. Ryan is such a common name, but hey, I'm not the one writing it. Hopefully, the author can write more romantic stories since his writing style kinda blends well with them, especially stories that are more popular with the women category. So far, I'll keep this in my library and read it leisurely.

I feel that the progression of the story was too fast for me to delve into the feeling. There are writing corrections too, but nothing that Grammarly or any writing tool can't help edit. As for the character design, I'm confused. I'm not sure whose story I am reading now, though the name Zerexs has a nice ring to it, I guess it needs more foundation. Like building his character first before progressing the story. His backstory was confusing me too, I'm not sure what the timeline is but every chapter felt like a different timeline, but the timeline is in the wrong order. Still, I can see potential.

I felt the explanation was a bit too fast. But the concept is interesting!

Shamelessly writing a review! Please give my novel a shot! Maybe it can be your cup of tea? I know it is a Boys Love novel, but in the future, I'll do my best to add Heterosexual contents too, other than the fantasy-action aspect of it.

Hi! So, I kind of revamped the whole novel! Feel free to keep it in your library if you enjoy reading it! I'll be posting 1 chap every day![img=recommend]

i don't think so, this should be a jump to the future after the war.

Shamelessly reviewing my own book sneeze 🤧🤧🤧 Well, tbh, I've been working hard on this novel, so hopefully, someone would leave some comments for me to read. 😊

every ant has an obsession.

agree